By Julie
I've wondered if other writers take as much pleasure as I do in a certain part of the research I undertake while writing a manuscript. I'll go ahead and call it found objects. These are objects that inspire, reinforce, enhance, and commemorate my writing.
Sometimes they're items I come across accidentally--or maybe
serendipitously--that don't serve any real purpose other than reminding
me of the work I'm doing. In this category is an infuser mug I bought at
World Market when I was writing a story with a character who was a
Japanese war bride, pictured here (the green one with the red lid).
After I bought it, I intentionally looked for items to represent each
of my main characters in that novel, intending to keep them on my
writing desk to help me stay on task. Too bad I didn't finish that
novel, but it was fun finding the objects and displaying them for a
while. Maybe the characters will make their ways into other stories
eventually, and the energy and money I spent won't have been wasted.
Another of those objects was an early 20th century era Catholic prayer
booklet for mothers, which I found on eBay along with a vintage rosary. I
was fascinated to discover carefully cut out flower art and a lace
bookmark inside the booklet, as well as hand-marked spaces for someone
to personalize it. I wondered who did that. Maybe it was simply an
unused gift. But maybe someone started it for herself, then never
finished it. A lost baby? Who knows, but my imagination was off and
running.
Some of our readers might remember when I did a giveaway before Calling Me Home released of a necklace I found on Etsy. I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw how perfect each of the items attached to the necklace was in telling the story I'd written in a nutshell.
I'm working on a new story right now, one I'm very excited about, and feeling more confident than I have in ages that it could be the "right" one. (How many times have you heard me say that now? But seriously, I'm all about writing the "right" story, so I'll keep hammering away until it happens.) I've been doing research until my eyes cross. I've read everything I can get my hands on about the topics contained within. I've written pages I'm pleased with, and pages I've deleted in disgust.
In the process, one of those "found objects" appeared this week. I confess my heart rate sped up a bit as I opened the package that came Thursday afternoon, a few days earlier than expected. Inside was a book I'd ordered, carefully wrapped in brown paper. A book published in 1931 -- a first edition, no less. I crossed my fingers it wouldn't smell too much of mold, as so many of my old books do. It was in good condition for being almost a century old, and I was thrilled to open the pages and find not only text, but slick pages with photos. A book that tells much more of the story I'm researching than I could ever find online or at any library in the area. Not only that, but it was the only copy I found for sale anywhere. One copy. I have to assume it was out there waiting. :)
I turned to the first page and began reading, and the sense I had of actually holding history in my hands was different than anything I've experienced yet while working on this story. I can't tell you more about it right now, but today, I feel very lucky about this "found object."
What about you? Share with us in the comments about "found objects" you have come across that have enhanced your writing or reading.
Friday, February 27, 2015
Monday, February 23, 2015
Weather as a character
by Joan
As I write this, ice taps the windows and wind batters the
chimney cap. I’ve just come in from helping my husband raise the exterior
shades on the two-story window and my fingers are still numb. A snowflake icon
shows up on my weather.com app for tomorrow (or today, as you are reading). No,
I’m not in the northeast; I’m in Dallas, where last week it was 75 degrees.
Maryland house, 1991 - 1999 |
For forty-five winters in Maryland, there was a particular
dread I’d feel going into November, knowing that I wouldn’t be warm again until
mid March. The jewel-toned October trees would strip naked and stand brittle
and grey. The sun would slink away earlier and earlier, sometimes not showing
up at all. I shivered constantly, no matter how many sweaters I crawled into. Some
years were worse than others, but in my memory the winter scene looks just as
it does now: temps in the teens, imminent or piled-up snow, wind that whips chill
into your bones.
Elmore Leonard said, “Never open a book with the weather.”
But what if your book features haunting, beating, relentless weather. The
problem with writing advice, particularly when it involves the word “never,” is
that there are brilliant stories that defy the rules. Beautiful prose, tension,
engaging characters; these are the elements which lure readers into a story.
Kim just reviewed Nancy Pickard’s The Virgin of Small Plains, which takes place during a deadly Kansas
blizzard. A while back, Julie reviewed Ann Weisgarber’s The Promise, set in Galveston, Texas, in
the weeks leading up to the devastating 1900 hurricane. In Weisgarber's novel, a scandalized
woman leaves Ohio to marry a widower in the south Texas town. She’s expecting a fine city house, but
instead he leads her to a sweltering, rustic home and a skittish child. Her new
husband’s housekeeper doesn’t trust her and is fiercely loyal to the memory of
his late wife, even as she harbors her own feelings for him. When the hurricane arrives, her husband goes out to help neighbors and the animals, and she is left
to protect his boy from the powerful storm that literally rips apart their house. It’s the weather that destroys everything, yet it also bonds
them.
In Jack London’s short story “To Build a Fire,” weather is the story. Over the course of a day,
a man attempts to walk over thirty miles of Canada’s Yukon trail to meet his
boys by suppertime, despite an old trapper’s warnings. It’s seventy-five below
freezing, snow as far as he can see, and he’s carrying nothing more than
bacon-stuffed biscuits, nuzzled against his skin to keep from freezing. With only
his husky for company, he is oddly confident. Both his and the dog’s beards have turned into crystal muzzles from the
moisture of their warm breath. Soon the man’s cheek bones and nose are frozen,
and his hands and feet are beginning to numb. The spruce under which he
attempts to light a fire is so weighted with snow, its branches cause an avalanche. In wonderful foreshadowing by London, the man feeds the fire “with twigs the size of his finger” and “branches the size of
his wrist.”
As I write my current story, I’m looking for places to
introduce weather into an already dangerous climate: The Depression, prohibition,
divorce, poverty. Wherever you are, I hope you are safe, warm and dry, reading
or writing a book with all the right elements.
Friday, February 20, 2015
A Review of Nancy Pickard’s The Virgin of Small Plains
By Kim
About The Virgin of
Small Plains (from the book jacket):
Small Plains, Kansas, January 23, 1987: In the midst of a
deadly blizzard, eighteen-year-old Rex Shellenberger scours his father’s
pasture, looking for helpless newborn calves. Then he makes a shocking
discovery: the naked, frozen body of a teenage girl, her skin as white as the
snow around her. Even dead, she is the most beautiful girl he’s ever seen. It
is a moment that will forever change his life and the lives of everyone around
him. The mysterious dead girl—the “Virgin of Small Plains”—inspires local
reverence: In the two decades following her death, strange miracles visit those
who faithfully tend to her grave; some even believe that her spirit can cure
deadly illnesses. Slowly, word of the legend spreads.
But what really happened in that snow-covered field? Why did
young Mitch Newquist disappear the day after the Virgin’s body was found,
leaving behind his distraught girlfriend, Abby Reynolds? Why do the town’s
three most powerful men—Dr. Quentin Reynolds, former sheriff Nathan
Shellenberger, and Judge Tom Newquist—all seem to be hiding the details of that
night.
Seventeen years later, when Mitch suddenly returns to Small
Plains, simmering tensions come to a head, ghosts that had long slumbered whisper
anew, and the secrets that some wish would stay buried rise again from the
grave of the Virgin. Abby—never having resolved her feelings for Mitch—is now
determined to uncover exactly what happened so many years ago to tear their
lives apart.
Three families and three friends, their worlds inexorably
altered in the course of one night, must confront the ever-unfolding consequences
in award-winning author Nancy Pickard’s remarkable novel of suspense.
Wonderfully written and utterly absorbing, The
Virgin of Small Plains is about the loss of faith, trust, and innocence…and
the possibility of redemption.
About Nancy Pickard (from the book jacket)
Nancy Pickard is the creator of the acclaimed Jenny Cain
mystery series. She has won the Anthony Award, two Macavity Awards, and two
Agatha Awards for her novels. She is a three-time Edgar Award nominee, most
recently for her first Marie Lightfoot mystery, The Whole Truth, which was a national bestseller. With Lynn Lott,
Pickard co-authored Seven Steps on the Writer’s
Path. She has been a national board member of the Mystery Writers of
America, as well as the president of Sisters in Crime. She lives in Prairie
Village, Kansas.
My Review:
I don’t remember the last time I read a mystery/suspense novel,
but The Virgin of Small Plains was one I felt compelled to pick up after Donald
Maass spoke about it at length during his 21st Century Fiction workshop.
(He’s not her agent.)
The praise was well deserved. The opening sequence of
events, though not a surprise after the workshop, still kept me glued to the
page. I read this book until two in the morning one night and picked it back up
at seven. I read it while I made breakfast, while I ate lunch, in the car
waiting for my daughter to get out of dance class, and every spare moment in
between. Pickard is a master at letting out just enough information to keep a
reader going, yet withholding the rest until the most devastating moment. I did
figure out one key element long before it was revealed, but the “how” and “why”
questions were equally compelling and not answered until the end.
Writers could learn a lot about pacing and point of view
from dissecting this novel. It is also a prime example of a genre novel with
literary elements.
Highly recommended.
Wednesday, February 18, 2015
Say What You Mean
by Elizabeth
I'm the mother of non-drivers (one close!), so I spend a significant amount of time in the car toting kids from point A to point B, both my own kids and their friends and schoolmates. Carpooling makes life easier for a lot of us in this boat, and modern technology makes carpooling even easier. Most of the time.
One recent afternoon near the final bell I group-texted the girls in my afterschool carpool that either both or neither could stay for tutoring that day. I got back two replies--both from my child--the first saying "Not going? (Friend)?" and the second, "Never mind. I'm staying."*
Me: "Is friend staying?"
(Call friend. No answer.)
Me: "2 or 0."
Me: "I am in car coming. You both need to come home."
Me: "I need you both to reply you got this."
Me: "No tutoring."
Me: "I expect to see you both at the curb. I really need you to communicate with me."
(Call daughter. No answer.)
Me: "I'm here. Why aren't you? This is not okay."
(Call daughter. Finally answers. Explains they both were staying for tutoring. I explain back that they had better get outside on the double.)
Daughter: "I am finding (friend)."
Me: "I am angry.**"
Daughter: "We are running."
You can use your imagination to supply the conversation that ensued when the girls got in the car a few minutes later. More than once I wondered if my daughter's silent friend would complain to her parents who would then nix the carpool. (I doubt it. I think they need it more than I do.) Let's just say there was some loud talking involved and the atmosphere was less than pleasant.
But then again, why should you use your imagination for this? I'm writing something intending to be understood, and you are reading something with the general hope to get something out of it. Just like the texts I sent, hoping to get some clear communication, so are you reading this with a similar goal.
My daughter at first defended her use of "I" to be understood as "we," but after some reaming she acknowledged that it was indeed some lousy communication. What I was angry** about was that this was a repeat offense, and what I was really angry** about was that the other kid who had apparently communicated with my daughter inside the school had failed to simply confirm that she, too, was staying. It was at best careless, and maybe even lazy, and certainly inconsiderate. (Though in the end, hardly a big deal, I know.)
It also reinforced the fact that good writing matters, and why good writing is fairly rare. It's easy to peck out a couple of letters on a keyboard and get some idea across. It's a lot harder to get a precise idea across, but for a writer, that's the job. Add elegance and style to precision, and suddenly it's clear that the writer's job requires far more than making sure "I" doesn't replace "we." It's clear that writing clearly and well takes both attention and respect.
We are living in an age of heightened communication, and this is surely not the first place you've heard someone lament that our increased communication perversely decreases our connections. My worry today is for what this will glean a generation from now. (Though history records that pretty much every generation, going back thousands of years, sighs at the thought of the next one's deficiencies.) Are we truly finally raising a population whose carelessness with writing might extend to fiction and formal writing? Or am I just "angry"** that I was inconvenienced and am illogically extrapolating a world of lazy novels and confusing biographies?
*I added punctuation. The serious deficiency of such is a rant for another day.
**Okay, I used another word.
I'm the mother of non-drivers (one close!), so I spend a significant amount of time in the car toting kids from point A to point B, both my own kids and their friends and schoolmates. Carpooling makes life easier for a lot of us in this boat, and modern technology makes carpooling even easier. Most of the time.
One recent afternoon near the final bell I group-texted the girls in my afterschool carpool that either both or neither could stay for tutoring that day. I got back two replies--both from my child--the first saying "Not going? (Friend)?" and the second, "Never mind. I'm staying."*
Look, a communication device! You'd think. |
(Call friend. No answer.)
Me: "2 or 0."
Me: "I am in car coming. You both need to come home."
Me: "I need you both to reply you got this."
Me: "No tutoring."
Me: "I expect to see you both at the curb. I really need you to communicate with me."
(Call daughter. No answer.)
Me: "I'm here. Why aren't you? This is not okay."
(Call daughter. Finally answers. Explains they both were staying for tutoring. I explain back that they had better get outside on the double.)
Daughter: "I am finding (friend)."
Me: "I am angry.**"
Daughter: "We are running."
You can use your imagination to supply the conversation that ensued when the girls got in the car a few minutes later. More than once I wondered if my daughter's silent friend would complain to her parents who would then nix the carpool. (I doubt it. I think they need it more than I do.) Let's just say there was some loud talking involved and the atmosphere was less than pleasant.
But then again, why should you use your imagination for this? I'm writing something intending to be understood, and you are reading something with the general hope to get something out of it. Just like the texts I sent, hoping to get some clear communication, so are you reading this with a similar goal.
My daughter at first defended her use of "I" to be understood as "we," but after some reaming she acknowledged that it was indeed some lousy communication. What I was angry** about was that this was a repeat offense, and what I was really angry** about was that the other kid who had apparently communicated with my daughter inside the school had failed to simply confirm that she, too, was staying. It was at best careless, and maybe even lazy, and certainly inconsiderate. (Though in the end, hardly a big deal, I know.)
It also reinforced the fact that good writing matters, and why good writing is fairly rare. It's easy to peck out a couple of letters on a keyboard and get some idea across. It's a lot harder to get a precise idea across, but for a writer, that's the job. Add elegance and style to precision, and suddenly it's clear that the writer's job requires far more than making sure "I" doesn't replace "we." It's clear that writing clearly and well takes both attention and respect.
We are living in an age of heightened communication, and this is surely not the first place you've heard someone lament that our increased communication perversely decreases our connections. My worry today is for what this will glean a generation from now. (Though history records that pretty much every generation, going back thousands of years, sighs at the thought of the next one's deficiencies.) Are we truly finally raising a population whose carelessness with writing might extend to fiction and formal writing? Or am I just "angry"** that I was inconvenienced and am illogically extrapolating a world of lazy novels and confusing biographies?
*I added punctuation. The serious deficiency of such is a rant for another day.
**Okay, I used another word.
Monday, February 16, 2015
50 Shades of Motivation
By Pamela
This past weekend marked the release of the film adaptation of the titillating best-selling novel Fifty Shades of Grey by E.L. James. Full disclosure: I did not read the trilogy, other than a sample of book one on my Kindle, so I refuse to comment on the quality of writing other than to say the opening was fairly unremarkable. It's been a while and I can't recall anything noteworthy about it. So there's that.
But, when you sell greater than 100 million copies of your books, no one can deny that you've done something right. From what I've read, James wrote a piece of fan fiction based on her adoration of the Twilight series and fans responded so encouragingly, she gave them more; first self-publishing her book before landing a publishing contract.
I've never met James nor read her interviews, but I can't help but wonder if she's at all bothered by the criticism her works have received. Does the phrase 'laughing all the way to the bank' fit her take on her publishing journey? Or does it sting a little to be so widely panned as a writing hack that parodies and mock readings abound online?
We've all read books that make us wonder why publishing gatekeepers felt moved to offer a book deal to the author, and how many readers prior to publication kept their collective pie-holes closed regarding the content. But like any viable industry, publishing houses are in business to turn a profit and if the readership seems poised to purchase, they print.
As writers, we have options for how we respond when we see authors achieve greatness we perceive to be based more on luck than talent. We can virtually flog them with our criticism. We can join in with praise we say but don't feel. We can leave our 'helpful' reviews on sites such as Amazon or GoodReads. We can keep our own pie-holes shut and say nothing at all.
Or we can see their success as motivation to keep plugging away at our own manuscripts. Because, to me, 100 million copies in sales means people are reading, and as long as we haven't lost that, we've all won.
This past weekend marked the release of the film adaptation of the titillating best-selling novel Fifty Shades of Grey by E.L. James. Full disclosure: I did not read the trilogy, other than a sample of book one on my Kindle, so I refuse to comment on the quality of writing other than to say the opening was fairly unremarkable. It's been a while and I can't recall anything noteworthy about it. So there's that.
Mr. Grey will read to you now! Flickr image by Mark Hillary |
But, when you sell greater than 100 million copies of your books, no one can deny that you've done something right. From what I've read, James wrote a piece of fan fiction based on her adoration of the Twilight series and fans responded so encouragingly, she gave them more; first self-publishing her book before landing a publishing contract.
I've never met James nor read her interviews, but I can't help but wonder if she's at all bothered by the criticism her works have received. Does the phrase 'laughing all the way to the bank' fit her take on her publishing journey? Or does it sting a little to be so widely panned as a writing hack that parodies and mock readings abound online?
We've all read books that make us wonder why publishing gatekeepers felt moved to offer a book deal to the author, and how many readers prior to publication kept their collective pie-holes closed regarding the content. But like any viable industry, publishing houses are in business to turn a profit and if the readership seems poised to purchase, they print.
As writers, we have options for how we respond when we see authors achieve greatness we perceive to be based more on luck than talent. We can virtually flog them with our criticism. We can join in with praise we say but don't feel. We can leave our 'helpful' reviews on sites such as Amazon or GoodReads. We can keep our own pie-holes shut and say nothing at all.
Or we can see their success as motivation to keep plugging away at our own manuscripts. Because, to me, 100 million copies in sales means people are reading, and as long as we haven't lost that, we've all won.
Friday, February 13, 2015
Happy Valentine's Day!
Happy Valentine's Day to all of you from What Women Write!
Here's hoping your weekend is filled with chocolate covered strawberries, wine, and books.
Enjoy!
Here's hoping your weekend is filled with chocolate covered strawberries, wine, and books.
Enjoy!
Monday, February 9, 2015
Megan Mayhew Bergman's Almost Famous Women
by Joan
Megan Mayhew Bergman |
“I’m interested in anyone’s particular sense of control and
autonomy — control over their own life. Traditionally and across many cultures
women’s desires and careers often take a back seat to the men in their lives
and I’m fascinated by cultures or particular women where this isn’t the case. I
respect the difficulty and complexity in stepping outside of those lives.
Especially when we’re talking a hundred years ago.” Megan Mayhew Bergman, in an interview with L.A. Review of Books
Bergman’s Almost Famous Women has earned a starred Kirkus review, impressive
reviews from NPR and the New York Times Book Review, and made several "books we're looking forward to" lists.
I pre-ordered Almost
Famous Women from Battenkill Books and so received my signed copy on
January 7th. Although I wanted to devour the collection in one long
sitting, instead I savored the stories over a few weeks. I knew from reading
Bergman’s Birds of a Lesser Paradise,
that to rush over her words would be akin to dashing through the Met in ten
minutes. I’d snatch glimpses of brilliant color and style, but would miss the
elegant narrative, subtext and symbolism crafted into each masterpiece.
Bergman’s fascination with these women began at an Oxford
summer program when she came across a book by Natalie Barney, an American author
who held a literary salon in Paris, was a great patron of women’s art and
happened to be romantically involved with some of these women. The stories
formed in Bergman’s mind over the next ten years of reading and researching.
Inside the lyrical cover are stories “born of a fascination
with real women whose remarkable lives were reduced to footnotes.” These women
hail from different social classes, races and continents, but they have a few
things in common: tragic lives, fierce spirits, and a desire to be seen; though
most would greet you with a punch, not a slap, for pitying them.
Many of the stories are narrated by close bystanders: a
lover, a caretaker, a friend. This construct prohibits us from understanding the
almost famous one’s motivations, but lets us view the tornado in progress—and
its inevitable destruction.
In “Romaine’s Remains,” an aged, suffering artist spends her
final days under the care of an Italian mama’s boy named Mario. Romaine Brooks is
an enigma; she sleeps with her “body curled like a prawn, her head lolled to
the side,” and yet she “tries to control the afternoon sun by slapping a
yardstick against the blinds.” Romaine is bitter and bedridden. She calls Mario
a brute, even though he’s gentle and kind with her, bathing her and carrying
her down a flight of stairs on her whim.
He half wishes she’d die, but then
worries he’d have to return to busing tables. Romaine, now nearly blind, has
led a daring bohemian life, painting “androgynous women in various brave poses
or nude recline,” drinking wine, and living with her lover Natalie in a Tuscan
Villa. This last bit Mario learns from snooping at her letters, and he is
struck by the idea that he “has never been explicitly himself.” When Romaine
confides in him details from her tragic childhood, he imagines she will set him
up with an annuity. But she is fickle and “more stubborn than blindness
itself.”
“The Autobiography of Allegra Byron” gutted me. Lord Byron’s
three-year-old illegitimate, unwanted daughter is sent away to an Italian
convent of Capuchin nuns. Despite her tragic circumstances, Allegra is not an easy
child to love. She throws tantrums, is spiteful and difficult. A peasant
woman who sought refuge in the convent after her own child and husband died of typhus, is
the only one who can calm Allegra down. “It had
always been my intention at the convent to be nobody, to go unnoticed, to
punish myself until I could no longer feel the weight of my dead child in my
arms.” When she becomes too close, the grieving woman is warned: “When the
children you’ve taught go home, they will hate you as if you’re the one who
kept them here.”
During one of Allegra’s particularly wild tantrums, one nun
threatens to call for an exorcism. But Allegra’s new guardian coaxes her into
the bath and offers to help her write letters to papa Byron. Both of these lost
souls need affection, to be held and soothed. But we learn early, “The convent
was not a place of peace.”
In “A High-Grade Bitch Sits Down for Lunch,” Beryl Markham
is broke and alone, “hungry to feel something every day,” even if it’s fear of
riding a wild stallion, the “one who’d killed a man with his hooves and teeth
in the corner of a stall in Nairobi.” To make her money back, she will ride
him. “I will have you, she thought, locking eyes with the regal horse.” When she
says, “You will respect me,” it is all of the women in these pages speaking.
In a Rutland Herald interview, Bergman shares what she hopes her
daughters will learn from reading this book: "I do hope they have the courage and intellectual curiosity to live
a satisfying, full life. … I want my girls to have the option. I don’t want
them to feel like a traditional domestic existence is a foregone conclusion. I
want them to feel that the world is wide open, that gender roles are fluid and
they can chase passions and dreams and professions and they can really be the
hero of their own life story."
Friday, February 6, 2015
Does Your Manuscript Have a Soundtrack?
By
Kim
It
feels odd for me to write a post about manuscripts having soundtracks since I’m
one of the few writers I know of who must compose in silence. It wasn't until
quite recently that I realized music still plays an integral part in my writing process.
A
little backstory: I spent most of the summer *cough* and fall *cough* stuck on
the same scene. I knew what needed to happen and I knew that writing it would
force me to go to revisit places in my mind I'd have done just about anything
to avoid. I hate fight scenes. Bickering is fine. Name-calling and any sort of
violence, no matter how mild, is highly troubling to my Introverted-Intuitive-Feeling-Prospecting
(INFP) personality type. Those who share that profile are called ‘diplomats’
for a reason, but I had to let these characters battle it out unhindered.
Back in November, a Facebook friend posted a
music video by The Family Crest, a group whose song “Love Don’t Go” was played
at the opening dinner for the Writer Unboxed UnConference. I remembered having liked that song,
so I clicked on the video for “Beneath the Brine.” Halfway through, I paused it and went over to iTunes to buy the whole album. The song is unsettling, to say
the least. An orchestral tempest of raw emotion sung by a man whose voice soars
to highs few humans could ever master. My mother went so far
as to compare listening to it with watching the movie Moulin Rouge. (I admit that film mesmerized me from
beginning to end.)
I
had probably heard “Beneath the Brine” several dozen times before I realized
why I kept hitting ‘repeat.’ The mood was exactly what I hoped to replicate in
the-scene-that-refused-to-be-written. It had all the waves and
lulls of a storm at sea, yet even the calm parts were rife with tension. With lines like ‘all of my love, and all of my life,
given to you, sacrificed’ this is a song I could well imagine Madonna singing to
Carl if this scene were part of an opera. Living with him was indeed like enduring
“a steady squall” where she must choose between her ambition and an obsessive
love that both sustains and slowly drowns her.
Once
I connected the song to my scene, the words all flowed out in one exhilarating
rush. (Thank you, Sean Walsh!)
This
experience made me think of other songs that have influenced my manuscript over
time. There are the obvious ones, such as "Amazing Grace", "Ave Maria", Tchaikovsky’s "Warum Op.6", and Alfredo Barili’s “Cradle Song”. All but the latter are ones
Madonna sang in her recitals or at other key moments in the book. Barili, one
of Atlanta’s most prominent composers, was Madonna's voice teacher in the summer of 1921. He
surely would have played her his most famous piece.
Two
songs from Cinema Paradiso (one of my favorite films of all time) are ideal to listen to before tackling a romantically nostalgic scene. The first is the lilting main theme (by Laurent Korcia) and the other is called “Se.” Josh Groban did an
amazing version of that song. It can turn me into a weeping sap in less than thirty seconds
even though it's in Italian.
“So She Dances,” also by Groban, perfectly illustrates Carl’s feelings for Madonna
during the Roycroft section of my manuscript. Christina Perri’s “Distance” sums up Madonna's side of
the relationship well, at least until it escalates to something more like “You
are all I see, sweet obsession in my soul. Fill each moment with your voice,
breathe your beauty into me.” – from Tara MacLean’s “For You.”
Other
songs in my manuscript’s soundtrack:
“After the Fall” by Cary Brothers
“MyImmortal” by Evanescence
“Gravity”
by Sara Bareilles
“I Should Go” by Levi Kreis
“Last Train Home” by Ryan Star
“Set the Fire to the Third Bar” by Snow Patrol
“Crack the Shutters” by Snow Patrol
“Shattered”
by Trading Yesterday
As
you can see, very few of these songs existed in the early 1900s. That doesn’t matter,
because songs from Carl and Madonna’s era would hold little emotional meaning for
me, the author of their story.
What
about you? Which songs have influenced your manuscript? Have you ever heard certain songs play in your mind while you read someone else's stories?
Wednesday, February 4, 2015
Contrast
by Elizabeth
My oldest friend faced one of the worst events of her life yesterday, and today she's scheduled to celebrate a spectacular achievement, what should, and surely will be, counted among the best days of her life. I'm hoping, as is she, that she'll get through the joy of today in one piece.
Life is stranger than fiction, the saying goes, and what I write is so much less important than what any human being feels. But being a writer, thinking like a writer, both these events and their emotional weight set me thinking about how life translates onto paper. Certainly both the high and low my friend is going through would be, have been, written about in fiction (as well as non-fiction, come to think of it, over and over again), from multiple points of view. How would I write these events if they were to figure in a novel? The story changes depending on who is telling it, even as the particulars stay the same.
And then, as a writer, as a plot-deviser, there is the question of contrast.
A few things have stuck with me from the very first writing conference I attended. One was a speaker advising us to put our characters in peril, and then make it worse. I think she likened it to putting the character up in a tree, then snatching away the ladder--and then lighting the tree on fire. I understood what she was conveying, and have benefitted from the advice in my writing. But even more, I came away from that seminar with the idea that while things can always get worse, but maybe what interests me most as a writer are the moments contrast of when things are great in the midst of awful.
In the novel I'm querying, I have a character who stands to benefit in a way that would fulfill her greatest wishes--but only if her greatest fear is realized. Contrast. In my work-in-progress, a character is faced with destroying the happiness of someone she loves, and if she doesn't? Then both that person, and someone she loves even more, risk a lifetime of grief. Contrast. One of my favorite movie scenes ever is in While You Were Sleeping when Jack tells Lucy she's not his brother's type, and she aches and he aches because he can't admit she is, in fact, his type, and she hears his silence as rejection. The moment could have been a turning point for them, but instead it's a barrier, and the emotional tug, pull, yank, is because of contrast.
Life is full of contrast. Often it's terrible to live through, dampening a moment that should shine--but perhaps the shining moments make the black ones bearable. My friend's day should be all about glory and celebration, but there will be a shadow. That said, will the contrast of the wonderful she gets to revel in today temper the grief of yesterday? I hope so.
My oldest friend faced one of the worst events of her life yesterday, and today she's scheduled to celebrate a spectacular achievement, what should, and surely will be, counted among the best days of her life. I'm hoping, as is she, that she'll get through the joy of today in one piece.
Life is stranger than fiction, the saying goes, and what I write is so much less important than what any human being feels. But being a writer, thinking like a writer, both these events and their emotional weight set me thinking about how life translates onto paper. Certainly both the high and low my friend is going through would be, have been, written about in fiction (as well as non-fiction, come to think of it, over and over again), from multiple points of view. How would I write these events if they were to figure in a novel? The story changes depending on who is telling it, even as the particulars stay the same.
And then, as a writer, as a plot-deviser, there is the question of contrast.
A few things have stuck with me from the very first writing conference I attended. One was a speaker advising us to put our characters in peril, and then make it worse. I think she likened it to putting the character up in a tree, then snatching away the ladder--and then lighting the tree on fire. I understood what she was conveying, and have benefitted from the advice in my writing. But even more, I came away from that seminar with the idea that while things can always get worse, but maybe what interests me most as a writer are the moments contrast of when things are great in the midst of awful.
In the novel I'm querying, I have a character who stands to benefit in a way that would fulfill her greatest wishes--but only if her greatest fear is realized. Contrast. In my work-in-progress, a character is faced with destroying the happiness of someone she loves, and if she doesn't? Then both that person, and someone she loves even more, risk a lifetime of grief. Contrast. One of my favorite movie scenes ever is in While You Were Sleeping when Jack tells Lucy she's not his brother's type, and she aches and he aches because he can't admit she is, in fact, his type, and she hears his silence as rejection. The moment could have been a turning point for them, but instead it's a barrier, and the emotional tug, pull, yank, is because of contrast.
Life is full of contrast. Often it's terrible to live through, dampening a moment that should shine--but perhaps the shining moments make the black ones bearable. My friend's day should be all about glory and celebration, but there will be a shadow. That said, will the contrast of the wonderful she gets to revel in today temper the grief of yesterday? I hope so.
Monday, February 2, 2015
In Praise of Libraries
By Pamela
As a kid, I felt pretty envious of my cousins' lifestyle. A real-life city mouse/country mouse saga was being played out with me as the mouse who lived next door to farmers and rode my bike down dangerous asphalt roads without a sidewalk to separate me from oncoming cars. Our trees and flowers grew without much thought or attention, and dogs ran loose and free. My nearest playmates, Connie and Brenda, lived over a half-mile away. But I really never labeled myself 'deprived' until I realized my cousins had library cards and, to me, that was almost akin to royalty status. Well, the library and access to a neighborhood pool.
I did have wonderful school libraries and count those librarians as some of my most treasured teachers. In fact, I stayed in touch with Mr. Wray, my elementary school librarian, up until my 20s--and that was before Facebook! But without access to a library in the summer, I was left to my own wiles and had to read whatever books we had around the house or I could borrow from friends.
Now as a certified city-dweller, I have a library two miles from my home. Not only does it have free Wi-Fi, study cubicles and meeting rooms, one can also borrow books, movies, audio books, children's learning kits and more. Plus they host a Friends of the Library used book sale four times a year and, if you happen to miss one, there's a bookcase of remainders with hard cover books a mere $2 and paperbacks for 75 cents. At my library, a teen writing group meets every month and so does a book club for adults. The local master gardeners put on talks quarterly and, if chess is your go-to stress reliever, the second-Sunday afternoon of each month is devoted to you.
I'll admit, since my daughter and I no longer attend the story time events (remind me to tell you about the one time she waited until I was unbuckling her from her car seat in the parking lot to announce she wasn't wearing any underwear) or puppet shows, I don't take advantage of all my library has to offer me. Like indoor plumbing and my dishwasher, it's a luxury I take for granted. But yesterday, I was in need of a book for one of my book clubs and hated to spend the money on a download if I didn't have to. So, I ventured to the library and there the book was, waiting for me to take it home. In fact, I had a choice--paperback or hard cover.
As I was waiting in line with my book (and three to buy from the leftover sale), I almost got teary-eyed watching a young mother and her toddler check out their stash--books and few that came with accessories that had to be contained in important plastic pouches. What memories they are making of spending time together, choosing stories that, no doubt, will mean time snuggled together side-by-side as they explore the imaginations of Seuss and Dahl and Eastman and Peet.
This made me realize that, while my girl has a stash of books that would be the envy of many and a Kindle, too, I need to get her back to the library. Maybe she'd even like to join that teen writing group.
What's waiting for you to discover at your local library?
As a kid, I felt pretty envious of my cousins' lifestyle. A real-life city mouse/country mouse saga was being played out with me as the mouse who lived next door to farmers and rode my bike down dangerous asphalt roads without a sidewalk to separate me from oncoming cars. Our trees and flowers grew without much thought or attention, and dogs ran loose and free. My nearest playmates, Connie and Brenda, lived over a half-mile away. But I really never labeled myself 'deprived' until I realized my cousins had library cards and, to me, that was almost akin to royalty status. Well, the library and access to a neighborhood pool.
I did have wonderful school libraries and count those librarians as some of my most treasured teachers. In fact, I stayed in touch with Mr. Wray, my elementary school librarian, up until my 20s--and that was before Facebook! But without access to a library in the summer, I was left to my own wiles and had to read whatever books we had around the house or I could borrow from friends.
Now as a certified city-dweller, I have a library two miles from my home. Not only does it have free Wi-Fi, study cubicles and meeting rooms, one can also borrow books, movies, audio books, children's learning kits and more. Plus they host a Friends of the Library used book sale four times a year and, if you happen to miss one, there's a bookcase of remainders with hard cover books a mere $2 and paperbacks for 75 cents. At my library, a teen writing group meets every month and so does a book club for adults. The local master gardeners put on talks quarterly and, if chess is your go-to stress reliever, the second-Sunday afternoon of each month is devoted to you.
I'll admit, since my daughter and I no longer attend the story time events (remind me to tell you about the one time she waited until I was unbuckling her from her car seat in the parking lot to announce she wasn't wearing any underwear) or puppet shows, I don't take advantage of all my library has to offer me. Like indoor plumbing and my dishwasher, it's a luxury I take for granted. But yesterday, I was in need of a book for one of my book clubs and hated to spend the money on a download if I didn't have to. So, I ventured to the library and there the book was, waiting for me to take it home. In fact, I had a choice--paperback or hard cover.
As I was waiting in line with my book (and three to buy from the leftover sale), I almost got teary-eyed watching a young mother and her toddler check out their stash--books and few that came with accessories that had to be contained in important plastic pouches. What memories they are making of spending time together, choosing stories that, no doubt, will mean time snuggled together side-by-side as they explore the imaginations of Seuss and Dahl and Eastman and Peet.
This made me realize that, while my girl has a stash of books that would be the envy of many and a Kindle, too, I need to get her back to the library. Maybe she'd even like to join that teen writing group.
What's waiting for you to discover at your local library?
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Pamela Hammonds,
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